But the real moral here? If you send me some poetry you like, there's a very good chance I'll post something about it. Thanks for the poem, Rachel!
Usually I don't like taking fragments or excerpts of poems out of context, but tonight I'll make an exception. I can't seem to get this one out of my head, even though I can't quite seem to figure out what it means, either. (Maybe if I read the rest of the book-length poem...)
I also like the unrhymed, unmetered couplets, as well as the internal rhymes here and there or just pleasing consonances of words that give it all a feel that this is actually a poem and not just a thought somebody broke up into stanzas.
from The Walls Do Not Fall
HD
we fight, they say, for breath,
so what good are your scribblings?
this - we take them with us
beyond death; Mercury, Hermes, Thoth
invented the script, letters, palette;
the indicated flute or lyre-notes
on papyrus or parchment
are magic, indelibly stamped
on the atmosphere somewhere,
forever; remember, O Sword,
you are the younger brother, the latter-born,
your Triumph, however exultant,
must one day be over,
in the beginning
was the Word.
So glad you liked it! I'm currently obsessed with H.D. We started Tribute to the Angels today in class and so much of it is strikingly appropriate for this weekend. Thanks so much for this blog by the way. It has me more excited about poetry then I think I have ever been.
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