Saturday, September 25, 2010

Saturday Spooky: Two Daniels

There's a long history of poetry about, for and to the dead. One might conceivably argue that all poetry is, considering the audience we write for today won't be alive in a century. Unless cryogenics isn't just a crazy fool's errand and Walt Disney is the wisest among us.


But here's something pretty explicitly supernatural, though in this poem it's not the dead but the living that creep me out.




Daniel
David Orr

On the day we moved in, the pings, bumps, and snaps
Were scary, it's true, but probably normal;
A house accepting new patterns of weight
With protest, the way no conviction goes gently.
We laughed a little, and called it "our spirit."


Later that night, when the power conked out
And the kids were crying, the ghost got a name,
"Daniel," and a history of whispered exploits,
All of them harmless, like nursery rhymes,
Or like the little fibs we tell ourselves
To explain why this or that has led to suffering.


Pretty soon, we were using him for everything.
When the Christmas tree fell, it was "Daniel";
When my wife lost her ring, it was "Daniel";
When the kids forgot to feed the goldfish
And it turned up dead, its eyes silvered over
Like water shadowed under sheets of ice,


Well, that became Daniel too, which was curious;
And pauses me now as I make the long walk
Down the hall to the bathroom in darkness,
And hear, in soft concert, the sound of my footfalls
Answered at once by my children's voices


Still calling to Daniel behind their door.










This has nothing in common with the poem but a title. But it's so awesome.


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