Monday, November 22, 2010

Poems Are Not Placards

I found this on the Slate Magazine poetry podcast and it knocked my socks off. At first, with all the science imagery and historical allusion, I figured it was an elegy for our modern era. Especially with a title like "The Age," it sounded like an epoch-spanning poem that's got huge universal truths on its mind.

And then you come to the end and realize that it was all a metaphor, that the night and the day, the science and the history are trying to talk about something so immediate and specific. The name of the new leader, the "O O O" that the children chant, it suddenly twists everything into a new focus like a kaleidoscope shook hard.

All in all, it's one of the most inscrutable and subtle political poems I've ever read, if that was indeed the poet's intention. If there was more political writing like this I might not hate protest poetry quite so much.




The Age
Gail Mazur

For what seemed an infinite time there were nights
that were too long. We knew a little science, not enough,

some cosmology. We'd heard of dark matter, we'd been assured
although it's everywhere, it doesn't collide, it will never slam

into our planet, it somehow obeys a gentler law of gravity,
its particles move through each other. We'd begun to understand

it shouldn't frighten us that we were the universe's debris,
or that when we look up at the stars, we're really looking back.

It was hard to like what we knew. We wanted to live
in the present, but it was dark. Ignorance

was one of our consolations. The universe was expanding
at an accelerating rate, we'd been told we were not at its center,

that it had no center. And how look forward with hope,
if not by looking up? I told the others we ought to study

history again, history teaches us more than erasures,
more than diminutions, there'd be something for us there.

I also dared to say we could begin to work at things again,
to make things, that I thought the hours of light would lengthen,

that nature still works that way. We would have a future.
Up to then we'd been observing anniversaries only

of mistakes and catastrophes, the darkness seemed to
blanket, to contain our terrible shame. I don't know

if anyone listened to me, it doesn't matter. Gradually,
afternoons began seeping back. As I'd promised, the children

could walk home from school in the freshening light,
they seemed more playful, singing nonsensical songs

so marvelous catbirds wanted to mimic them. Why say anything,
why tell them the endless nights would return? Listen to them,

the name of a new leader they trust on their lips, O O O they chant,
and I hear like one struggling to wake from a mournful dream.




2 comments:

  1. That's well written. Much less inflamed than anything you see these days. As for the Rally Sign, I thought you would do this one: http://s-ak.buzzfed.com/static/enhanced/terminal01/2010/10/30/17/enhanced-buzz-3269-1288474365-18.jpg Reminds me of a catchy song I know... ;)

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  2. Nice sign - yeah, it does smack of some folkie songwriter accidentally ripping of a Slayer album. As for "anything you see these days," this poem couldn't have been written before at least 2008 - do you think things have gotten that much more heated in two years?

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